Love this so damn much please please update soon can't wait for new chapter soob

I was so excited to see a new chapter from you in my email! Amazing please add another one soon!

Awesome, I love it. Please don't let Bella get changed into a vampire.

Dani

Oh no I hope nothing has happened to Bella, if so I wonder if the pack will kill her. They should of had two wolves protecting her right, not just Jacob Black, but what happened to him as well.

This is so good! Can’t wait to see what happened

Please write more.

Worth the wait! Amazing

Don’t you dare let anything happen to Jacob and Bella. Edward doesn’t deserve shit the bastard. I hope Paul can recover from what ever is happening to him and use the mating bite to find Bella and Jacob and Killeen Edward for his bullshit he has caused them.

Great chapter! I hope they can find Bella and she's okay! Loved it! Thank you for updating!

Noosa pls dont be what im thinking. With the way Paul is acting im thinking Victoria or Edward bit Bella. I dont want her to turn

Hurry Paul!

Aw man ending the chapter right there was cruel lol can't wait for the next chapter

Please update soon

Any plans to finish?

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Chapter 25
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