Reviews for Pyrus 'n Ventus |
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![]() ![]() Hehehhehe. Dan predicted his Pyrus Red colour and Shun's Ventus Green. /snickers/ And then their bakugan! YOU'RE A WIZARD DAN! |
![]() ![]() Oh my Gosh! That was absolutely hilarious! I really enjoyed this chapter. It continuously reminds me that I have abandoned my Sims Town on my phone. I wonder is it possible for them to die? |
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![]() ![]() 0.0 lolz I'm laughing my axx off |
![]() ![]() Hahaha pe like the washroom lolz |
![]() ![]() For starters I would never do that to Shun-niisa that's just not right or nice at all. |
![]() ![]() this was a really good story but what about the halloween stories you said you would post |
![]() ![]() this was strange on many levels why did shun act so weird |
![]() ![]() givin how he knew he would see runo again and he knew he and shun would have a dragon and a phonix to help them fight im starting to think hs phychic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I wish some of the chapters could've been longer, but it was great none the less. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! so well planned and portrayed! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i would be scared of my reflection too if i was dan lol nice story i'll keep readinggg |
![]() ![]() I LUUUUV IT! who wouldnt? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow nice work on that story! I did lisen to sympathy on my ds and it work so well, it was made for it! so thanks I loved it.. -Leocrystal |
![]() ![]() OM this is too cute! How have I not read this before! I'm totally in love with this... I love kiddie!Dan and Kiddie!Shun playing Pokemon, what an adorable image... though I always figured Dan would've picked a Chikorita... it's fun to see what Pokemon characters from other anime series would've picked! anyway, i don't think you portrayed them too OOC at all, considering they're kids. gah, it's just too cute! anyway, ill read more when i have time! |