Reviews for Phantom Darkness
Guest chapter 17 . 12/7/2019
I know it's been literal years but PLEASE continue!

I LOVE this!
Devious Purrloin chapter 5 . 5/9/2018
It's not waken, it's woken since it's past tense.
Light Phigon chapter 17 . 12/19/2017
update soon!
ElizabethBathog chapter 16 . 6/17/2016
Not a bad idea but i think i will not read the last chapter. Danny and Zweilous just left Piplup is not what i expected since it would leave Piplup in danger! Its not a bad try so don't give up on writhing and you will get better. I myself is Swedish and have dyslexia so writing is hard for me but i am still trying! Good luck whit your future writing! :)
Eli Clark chapter 11 . 3/31/2016
It's kinda boring without Ash and the others, but I like the fact Danny is an Umbreon.
ivanganev1992 chapter 17 . 1/5/2016
Ch 17

Danny didn't learned consciously to transform in his alter ego or his ghost moves originally. And scared to reveal that.

And he is undoubtedly too weak and injured to do anything. If he could learn his original moves by any way ok . But firstly to heal . And of course the poisoned piplob .

What happens next?
Guest chapter 17 . 9/29/2015
Why did you stop at a cliffhanger
Basket in a Nutcase chapter 17 . 12/5/2013
when u updaaaaaaaaate?
Basket in a Nutcase chapter 1 . 12/5/2013
cut for suspense!
Danny:ohmygah!
agest chapter 13 . 9/26/2013
ive rade to training and STILL dont know what is going on!
Guest chapter 9 . 7/8/2013
Ok, I'M REALLY SORRY I'M UPDATING 1 MONTH LATER! But I had to study for the hardest exams in the whole school year, so I had no time for writing chapter 9, and had a big writer's block. But now that the vacations are starting, I will have enough time for finishing this fic. Let's get started

Chapter 9: Second round

Danny was confident in that he would win with his well-known powers against Dusknoir. In the other hand, the ghost couldn't stop getting surprised by the fact that Danny still had his ghost powers, but had to pretend he wasn't. The battle would get too harder for both Pokémon, Dusknoir thought, because if one of them released a ghost attack against the another, it would be too painful.

'At least that boy doesn't know that that is our weak point, and I'm sure I won't let him find it out before I attack' the ghost thought confidently and just looked patiently at his opponent, trying to read his movements. Danny didn't move for some minutes because he was suddenly debating in his mind about his powers.

'What if they don't work in the time I need them? Are these really my ghost powers, or are they part of Umbreon's? How do I activate them?' were the questions that repeated over and over in his mind. Dusknoir was getting bored and impatient about the silence that was surrounding them, not even Pikachu or Poochyena moving, and wanted so urgently to start already, but if he wanted a smart battle, patience was vital. The Umbreon noticed the still unconscious Pokémon with the corner of his eyes and turned around a little to have a better look of them. Both of them were bleeding and had scratches all over their bodies, and were surrounded by sharp rocks. Sandslash just looked at the hurt and fainted duo very satisfied.

Because Danny was a bit distracted, Dusknoir, tired of waiting, threw a swift punch at Umbreon, who turned around and glared at Dusknoir.

'Darn it! I forgot he is now a ghost type, so Fight attacks won't work' the ghost scolded himself in his mind, and, as if Danny had read his mind, smiled.

"Where did the intelligent guy go?" he taunted and tried tackling the ghost, without any success.

"Well boy, it seems that you also have got lots of things to learn from here" Danny concentrated and fired a green ecto-blast towards the ghost, who put up and shield and tried reflecting the attack. It was useless as the blast performed the shield and badly hurt him.

"I learn fast" the Umbreon presumed and kept firing blasts towards the surprised ghost, who managed to avoid most of the attacks.

'I have underestimated a bit the kid. Maybe he has got the point of the ghost attacks…' He suddenly stopped and looked at the sky, a puzzled look on his face.

'Wait a second…These attacks…aren't ones I have seen before. They aren't Pokémon attacks' started reasoning. Even though Danny's attacks did decent damage, they were draining lot of energy from him, and he couldn't keep on faster. Dusknoir was taken back to reality by a strong blast hitting his stomach. Not standing the attack, he slowly fell. Danny noticed that his unique red eye flashed again for a millisecond before being unconscious.

"With my ghost powers back, these guys aren't that difficult to defeat" whispered to himself and looked around. Unfortunately for him, the shield was still surrounding both Pokémon. He tried once more to get out, getting hurt. As the seconds slowly passed he felt more and more tired, almost like fainting. But he had to save his friends before losing consciousness, and so he kept trying attacking the shield. Being busy doing this, he didn't notice Sandslash walking through the shield quietly. A ghostly aura surrounded his sharp claws, and then bowed down to the fainted Dusknoir. Gently, he touched his head, the aura surrounding the ghost. Dusknoir got up and looked at Danny, who was panting heavily.

Sandslash slowly approached Danny and lifted up it's paw to attack, but Dusknoir shook it's head. The look in the mouse's face indicated that he was frustrated, but didn't disobey his 'master's' orders and walked out of the shield.

The aura Sandslash gave Dusknoir was still surrounding him, healing slowly his wounds.

"D-Don't worry…Pikachu…Poochyena…I will help you…no matter what" Dusknoir heard Danny's wishes, who then got up slowly and tried attacking the shield once more. Dusknoir's stomach opened, revealing a strange mouth, and he flew towards the tired Umbreon. When he was close enough, the ghost quickly closed the mouth and grabbed one of his paws. Gasping at the sudden unexpected pain, he turned around and noticed the biting ghost.

"W-What? You were supposed to be fainted by my attacks" cried Danny, completely incredulous, earning a devil laugh from the ghost.

"Even though I didn't expect you to get these strange powers at the last moment, neither to get weakened by a newbie, I have lots of plans that makes me win this fight, no matter what, so that minutes you thought you had your victory were just the start for my strategies" Dusknoir then started hurting Danny with electricity* badly. Danny tried to break free, without any success.

When the memory of his hurt friends came to his mind, he got mad once more, his tail suddenly shining. By instinct, Danny swung his tail the most he could and hurt the ghost's stomach, forcing it open. Danny tried to stand on his hurt feet, but because it was still injured, he fell over. The ghostly aura around the ghost quickly healed his wound. Deciding to keep on the battle, the tired Umbreon concentrated energy on his mouth and on his tail, and at first fired a dark green beam, which the ghost managed to endure for a few milliseconds before getting tired and receiving just a bit from the attack. Danny's second attack was to swing his tail. Dusknoir managed to concentrate dark energy on one of his hands on time and transform it into a sword to block Danny's Iron Tail.

Both Pokémon kept swinging their sword and tail for more than 5 minutes, none of them getting a scratch from the other's attack. Danny considered this scene as a good opportunity to practice a little his Pokémon powers. That's why he just kept swinging instead of firing a beam.

Dusknoir got eventually bored, so he transformed back his dark sword into a ball and tried firing it at Danny, but because he just kept swinging, the attack was ignored.

'Darn! This boy is knowing the ropes bit by bit as time passes! If I keep doing this, he will take it lightly' started getting worried the ghost. Danny, too tired now, stopped and landed on his 4 paws. Big mistake, he fell over again.

Dusknoir smiled, seeing this small chance as his opportunity to badly injure Danny, and fired a shadow ball. Dusknoir was expecting a strong yell from the hurt Umbreon, but just heard a weak gasp. Incredulous, he looked at his hands.

'What? If my math's aren't wrong, a ghost attack is one of the strongest and one of the most effective against a ghost Pokémon. Something's not right'

Now was Danny's turn to approach Dusknoir. Remembering he could bite, he ran towards the deep-in-thought ghost, opened his mouth and bit the antenna in his head. Gasping at the pain, the ghost looked up and saw Danny. Knowing Danny was using a Dark attack against him, he tried to take him off of his head, but the Umbreon was biting hard. Dusknoir tried attacking Danny with psychic waves, but he seemed unharmed by the attack. The now frustrated ghost had no other option but to electrocute his rival. One second after feeling the attack, he immediately jumped back and panted.

"If biting is what you wish, then it will be" Dusknoir declared as he opened his stomach again. Danny had to go with that because he was too tired to use a non-physical attack. He once more opened his mouth and ran towards Dusknoir, who was also flying towards him.

'This is not that fair. Dusknoir's mouth is way bigger than mine, I will have to stay alert' thought Danny while trying to bite the ghost. Dusknoir tried firing a shadow and a dark balls at the same time, hoping to inflict the most damage, but the Umbreon endured the hit.

'Indeed this is quite strange. Those attacks would make a ghost faint at the instant. This boy is very strong to endure those hits'

Danny was somehow scared. Dusknoir was most of the time in deep thoughts, making Umbreon think that he was making another strategy, or figuring a way to defeat him easily. Danny had tried many times to activate the healing shield, but whenever he tried, he would feel a strange and strong pain in his body. However, he decided to use his distraction as an advantage and used another Iron Tail towards Dusknoir. But suddenly, Sandslash got out of the sand and hit Danny's left eye with it's sharp claws, making a big scar on it. Danny growled and lowered his head, looking at some blood drops falling from his hurt eye. Angry, he looked up and tackled the mouse.

In an attempt to escape, Sandslash tried slashing Umbreon's right eye, but he had noticed it's intentions on time and lowered his head, gasping from the strong slashes. Dusknoir was no longer thinking, instead watching the fight. Danny and the mouse started tackling themselves, occasionally firing dark beams or steel balls. As the smart Pokémon Dusknoir was, he wanted to take advantage and knock out Umbreon, but he just wanted to see how his slave battled the fight. At his eyes, Sandslash was wining easily. The spiked-mouse started another sandstorm inside the shield and started moving faster. Danny just could see the ghost, who seemed unaffected by the storm. So he changed his target and fired a dark beam at Dusknoir. Unfortunately for Danny, Sandslash was expecting that attack and protected his master. Danny concentrated energy, almost ready to attack again, but before he was able to release it, the ghost snapped it's fingers. The mouse got out of the shield, concentrated a gray aura in it's paws and looked at the fainted Pokémon duo, his look showing his intentions to attack t
Atizfan4 chapter 17 . 5/11/2013
Please continue I just started reading but it is an awesome story
DPhantom5221 chapter 10 . 4/6/2013
AWWWWW SO CUTE!
popie92 chapter 17 . 2/21/2013
Update
Karyn Phantom chapter 17 . 12/31/2012
Can't wait for the next chapter
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