Ohhhhh, PART 2 PLEASE!

Oh, yes THAT ASSIMILATION SCENE with Dalla was PERFECT

Ohhhh, yes Tarkin is the PERFECT willing Locutus.
I also like how you have combined the Queen with the TNG era style Borg.

Sold from THE FIRST PARAGRAPH!

Cool ending. I also liked Vader just going medievil on the Borg and erasing their minds.

Excellent story. Good work.

Good chapter. I liked how you took the reader through the process Daala going from human to Borg. Great inner thoughts from her.

Oh snap! Total "First Contact" here. Things look to get really interesting now that the Borg have infiltrated the Death Star. I am so enjoying this story.

Good chapter. I like the tactics of the Borg as they prepare to engage the Death Star.

Way cool. I really liked the way you described being inside the Borg mind with Darth Vader and Tarkin. Good job on Tarkin's path to finally betraying the Empire. You have one really good story here.

Good scene. I liked watching Darth Vader kick some Borg butt! Yeah, what can the Borg do against the Force. Interested to see if they have some way to adapt to it.

Good job!

Oh, just one typo I spotted. "cam" instead of "came."

Even so, from a spelling and grammatical standpoint, this is a very clean story.

Good stuff. I liked how you portrayed your major. Definitely acted as someone promoted beyond his ability because of who is uncle is. A few sentences you used "Blast" and "Damage" a few too many times. It will be cool to see what happens when the Borg invade the Death Star.

Very cool beginning and well-written. I don't notice any spelling or grammar errors. I really like the way you write for the Borg. The Death Star vs. a Borg Cube. This looks like it's going to be wicked awesome!

Great story.

this IS SO DAMN GOOD MORE IS NEEDED

Dude, you gotta keep going. It rocks!