| Reviews for Be My Sub |
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   blackwolf3991 chapter 17 . 6/17 please please update |
| JustAnotherGal chapter 17 . 4/14 Loving it. Please update next chapter soon. |
| 1 grandma chapter 17 . 6/19/2019 I love the story this far just wish you had finished it. |
| Nicoconsd chapter 17 . 5/27/2019 Wow so I found this story and was really enjoying it but whew you def ended on a cliffy... I'm super curious where Bella went and can she read minds and does she know Edward's a vampire! :) |
| Bedward2922 chapter 17 . 11/1/2018 I really liked that story so much |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/22/2018 He trained with tanya? Wow, im out! That's so fucking nasty. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2018 oh ive read this before. It was so idiotic. Edward has never "wanted a woman" Yet hes interviewing subs. Hes never had an erection, yet hes interviewing subs! LOL Its just laughable. He didn't even know what lust really felt like, but you have him looking for a sex slave? This is so amazingly stupid. And I HATE that he can read bellas mind. And he trained to be a dom? Oh ya? With who? How did that work out? How did he know that he wanted to not only dominate his partner but sexually dominate his partner when he never even wanted a woman before? How does that work exactly? |
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/12/2018 I don't get why he would want to wax her that bad. Sure wanting to do it is one thing but hes gripping the couch in ...anticipation? Its so fucking weird. And I'm so fed up with bellas simple thoughts, she comes off as retarded. ENOUGH! I cant read this bullshit anymore. |
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/12/2018 Lets talk about chapter 8. You want us to believe that Edward would rather be raped then to hit his attacker? YA OOOOOK And the way you had him fall apart was just fucking weird...his "fix me" was so damn pathetic. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/12/2018 Bellas thoughts are as annoying as ever. I really wish you would have just cut all her thoughts out. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2018 So Edward trained to be a dom even though he had never been sexually attracted to a woman? And then went looking for a sex slave even though he didn't know if he was even capable of getting an erection? That really doesn't make any sense...AT ALL. And I hate bellas thoughts. Shes just really fucking stupid and I wish he couldn't read her thoughts. |
| grandmachix chapter 17 . 2/6/2018 NO NO NO NO! You can't leave it like that! You stopped six years ago. You have to finish. Judy |
| Doryfin chapter 1 . 2/1/2018 This was great I can't wait to read what's next |
| Winter0800 chapter 1 . 1/23/2018 This is a really good story! |
| Lillywhite1 chapter 17 . 1/13/2017 Thanks for writing this wonderfull story! Its one of those I would pay for to have it completed. What a pity you didn't. |
