Happy that they ended up together. Sad that it ended too soon!

Bwahaha. I love Fate's reaction to Nanoha's outfit. That was fun!

Oh naughty Hayate you! You slept with Fate now you want to sleep with her adoptive Mother. How kinky . Can't stop smiling at this!

Ok I have to admit, imagining Nanoha working at the bar really works. Ala Coyote Ugly only a bit more on the cosplay side. They should be dancing in the bar! Woohoo. That would have been really something! Anyways, I have seen Card Captor Sakura so I had to look up her costume. Haha! Cute!

I'm curious why the other mothers are looking down at her? Do they have a riff with her or something?

What course was Fate studying? Is she about to graduate? So Nanoha has not graduated? How many girls are employed in the club? Now that this 'friendship' is getting better, does it mean that Nanoha won't be working at the club anymore? I'd think they would want to be exclusive or something? So many questions. Better stick around!

Oh wait! The part about wrestling made me laugh so hard people looked at me funny in the train

I was hoping their characters were developed more, wit more background details on their life before they hit the sack. I hope ink that makes it more sweet and romantic don't you think? Still this is your story and I'm glad that you have written this concept. I like it!

Oh my Goodness. Hayate is nkt my fave in this story but this story totally makes her funny and interesting. Wow! So is Lindy into women now?

I can't believe how much fun I had reading how Hayate,"test drives." Man, that was effin awesome. I'm also
Quite curious with Nanoha, she's quite bold or is this only with Fate?

Sheesh! Fluffy feelings all around! I so love heckmcept and the first chapter was very refreshing. I love your writing style and can't wait to read the rest of the story!

great finish. also the cosplay costumes were nice and familiar.

Don't frequently read about weddings in stories. Still, it is sweet.

The story arc with vivio's mother maybe but there is still a lot more you can do with this series. Mainly focusing on other character like hayate and lindy, Subaru and Tea and all the other minor characters.

Wait, so this is the last chapter? Well i'm glad to see it updated i can't help but be disappointed this is the last. You may want to change this series to complete too.

More parties! Thanks for the wonderful story.

please continue