really, couldn't you have continued the story, I hated the ending. maybe you'll consider putting up some more chapters? but all in all a bit dull

Badly plotted, badly spelled and badly characterized. I don't think I have to say much else.

*sniffle* that was wonderful! you are a very great writer! post more soon!

~S~

WAI! That was so pretty! I loved it!

You WILL write more *hitches up her skirt and gets on her knees* PUHHLEASEE!

Are you saying this is it? Aww tater come on, this is to good to stop there. Pleeeeeease keep going!

i REALLY liked it! :) but it can't end there! come now...please? just a bit more? :)

this is great. perhaps you should make this tid-bit into a meal (if you want to of course).

Wow! *applauds* I loved that. I've been touched by fanfics before, but this takes the cake. Really. So sad, so sweet. Aww!

Congratulations Potato, you have thoroughly upset me! It takes a lot to do that, I wish the doctor had eaten her date or something... I love it when people make a story go away from the obvious and expected, so even though I am sad, I must admit that this was well written and I loved it!

There has to be more..if not write more...we cant leave it like that...chameleons dont have proper knees to get on but..*on knees* please continue this story...you wrote it wonderfully! BRAVO!

Is this it, really? This was beautiful, are you sure you won't consider adding more to it? This was really nicely written.

SJ