I mean, he could be the Shinigami, Thalia could be goddess of Jutsu, and Clarisse of Shinobi War.

Interesting...

lol so charmspeaktalk no jutsu XD

Do you know any good Gary Stu or overpowered author oc fanfiction like a gamer importantly keep up the awesome work.

You’re making other people to powerful; the story says “naruto: prince of the underworld” not “naruto and friends: travel to an alternate dimension.” Stop adding too many people.

Naruto was 12 when he died smh, where did he get his intelligence from?

Naruto never learned the chidori️

Good job looking forward to reading the sequel!

Shuriken. There is no a in that word. Just saying

I wonder if you really ever went back to edit your work?
It might be a good idea to try you know.

Dude, don't copy and paste... That's so lame. At least you admit that you wanted to do that though.. Most people won't. I'll give your at least some respect for being honest.
I'll still read it if it's good enough anyways though

I'm not sure if you actually meant guitar keychains... Did you? That would be a cool design, but hard to imagine exactly how that looks just by how it's described. Do you have a longer, more in depth description that you could pm me for me to read? That would be awesome because then I could better imagine it. Thanks!

The first thing that came to my mind when I saw the title of this chapter was the song from Aladdin a whole new world and started singing it

This was an interesting story but the ending was a bit abrupt. I'm looking forward to reading more

Absolutely the fuck not, teaching them jutsu takes away from Naruto's specialness factor, not even sure how you'd teach chakraless beings jutsu