I've read, and I must say, that I did love the story, but I must admit that I skipped the other parts that didn't include any of the original characters, sorry about that, I just wanted to see how things would be from this perspective, I doused off for any other scene. Sorry about that :p however, I do have an interest in the story continuation if it ever comes to, but who knows how long :"c

The Farwalker's Quest is a really good book. if that is what you are basing Vaga on

Keep up the good work

It's good but I'm not going to follow something that only gets updated every once in awhile it's been 3 years since the last

It’s too AU for me and I’m not a giant fan of Mercer being inside him

Hope this is still being worked on but i doubt it since it hasn't been updated in several year but i can still hope

Your oc is so pointless and you version of Alex has killed the story I’m out

damnit. the story is great and i hoped to read more chapter.

I love this story please update it!

Why the hell put in useless shit then dude that doesnt make since

to make a new attack you just need a name a the general idea what you want

so his memory is now alwase blank, ohh i knew that just didnt think to remember it...

you have biomass as a body, this means the onky thing you need to train is mussle reflex and maybe chakra control. your body can mold its mussles in top shape, you can even mold your chakra coils bigger or smaller and thus increase your control.
dont worry though ive only read 1 story so far that got this

his eye changed because he is becoming like mercer, a natural shape shifter. see where im going with this?

you eat ppl you monster.
uhh hello which one of us has been training to become the strongest killer since the age of 8 and which has was a sientist?