That's so sad. Alice died because she drew out her game too long. And Bella as a f**king murderer? I did not see it coming. I mean, Alice killed Esme, but she's kind of a mentally-disturbed kid with serious problems she should get a therapist for. I feel sorry for her, more than wishing she would die. But now she can't hurt anyone, so maybe it's for the best. She's in a better place now, where she can have things she wants and she can be happy without hurting anyone. Maybe it's for the best.

I didn't expect this ending but I like the ending of Alice. But that sounds bad, hahaha.

Sorry it took so long for me to review, my net got cut off and I've been bumming for a while now.

The story was wonderful and I can't wait for more from you.

Glad I finished this in broad daylight, LOL. Good job, I really enjoyed it!

What a great Halloween story. Well done.

Dude, was some seriously crepy shit. Kudos to you! :) A what an awesome day to end it on: Halloween.

Oh my.

Alice had me very freaked out.

I did get a little confused in this chatper, though, was Alice really a witch of was she pretending? And if she was, why did Esmehaveaheart attack?

that was great! )

Please update on Halloween! That would be perfect!

no not esme!

So glad you updated. Your spooky story is just the thing for Hallowe'en approaching.

Please do not let Alice kill that puppy...too wrong!

Oh dear lord, this Alice in a cemetery, wanting to make poison, gah!

Your story is spooking me out! But I am reading on...

OH MY GOD THAT LITTLE BITCH. ASKING FOR HER PUPPY.

You know, I think it's wierd that that part right there is what really pisses me off about Alice.

Poor puppy. She'll probably sacrifice the thing.

Sorry for not reviewing earlier. I think I forgot I got the Alert. Lol.

awww thats horrible! i dont like this very much. . i mean its a great plot and stuff but thats scary and sad and Alice wouldn't really hurt a puppy. . :( :( :( :( :( :(