This is breathtaking. Really amazing work, I absolutely adore it to pieces.

This is gorgeously written, so vivid and alive. Love the characterisation and adore the way you wrote Philemon in, something that is rarely done at all and even rarer done well (which is especially impressing considering that, if I got that right, you have never played P1 or P2). The meeting is probably one of my favourite things about this fic.

Lovely story. Love the tone, and the imagery. Thanks for sharing!

i just love how you wrote this :D very nice and lovely. great job!

aw. -hearts-

Good job on this, I enjoyed reading this!

This was good. Loving the Philemon reference. Also the Ryoji bit at the end was very well done.

You, are amazing. I see that Philemon reference you made in the third segment of the story, and since you don't see many of those these days in fan fiction, I was blown away. All in all, it was a good read; there are no major grammatic errors or things I see wrong. I'd like to read more, that much is certain.

Keep up the good work.