This one always makes my stomach turn. I get so many tingly feelings from /w/

i feel like queeling, with all these ticklish butterflies in my stomach! /w/

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!

You are a wonderful author and I love your work, typos or not. It's hard to find good Emil x Richter stories.

I remember reading this back then and yeah this is much better!
It wasn't bad back then just...more amateurish But hey that's what the four years of writing fixed.

This is really cute and awesome! Good job!

OMFG tht was awesome. My heart was beating so fast! I love the part where he says let's taste th rest in the bedroom. OwO my eyes were so wide OwO

MY EYES ARE THE FREAKING SIZE OF SAUCERS! I MEAN IT.

I'm not a Richter X Emil fan but this was enough to get me ever so closer to the line. I liked it. You were very descriptive about the kissing scene that I think I gave my first kiss away to myself. XD

Definitely funny. XD I knew that would lead to the bedroom... xD

I loved this story. So hard. It was amazing.

OwO 33 Great story :D That last part was best x3

'I think we should taste the rest upstairs' that was my favorite part.

First, fair warning: You don't always get a lot of tips and crits here, FFN just isn't always the best place to try to improve your writing. That said, I'd be happy to offer a few tips on things I notice that are a bit off. :3

Now, about the story: I think you handled the characters well. Emil is handled nicely, shy and cute and devoted to Richter. Then Richter with his seriousness and lack of readily showing his emotions. I think you did well here. ..

Though, I'm wondering, what sort of cake is Emil making? Normally when I think of cakes, I think of baking them and stuff. Now I'm curious. :3

As for how you wrote this in general, I like it. I noticed a few tiny things, mostly a few small typos(You have "Next ,he dipped", with the space in the wrong place and you write 'kitchentable' as one word, not two, I'm pretty sure it's two words.), and Richter says "reason of the cake" but I think 'for the cake' might sound better.

Other than that, over all you've done a nice job. :3

I liked the ending, the last line made me giggle. XD It makes me have lovely mental images running through my head. :3

I agree that we don't have enough of this pairing, I hope you'll continue to write more for them, there needs to be more!