Decent lemon

Its okay! Btw, anyone who badly reviewed the chapter i have no idea what ur talking about cause the chapter was amazing. I mean, i know, everybody has their own opinions, but srly, i dont know what da HEK ur talking about cause i loved it

Please do a secuel ️

Don't worry about the hate - it happens a lot. I appreciate the story, and I loved it. Not a thing I'd change.

Without doubt one of the best SS lemon fics. The only blot on perfection is that Sasuke is once again womanizer which doesn't suit his character. Especially in ninja world fic and not AU.

Great story! Loved it.. too bad there isn’t a sequel..

This is literally the hottest fanfic I have ever read.

Alot of details, I thought I had stumbled upon another kid that didn't know how to spell, but I was surprised when I started reading.

update come on update this is amazing

update

You know you weren't the only one! Specially with kids who too many years ago were reading mature content on ff net and getting their own idea and possibly writing themselves. I kept a journal in my pre-teens, I have proof of how absurd sexuality can be interpreted. The fascination with it drove my young mind into some very dirty and unreal territory. It's funny now - but not enough to share, still too embarrassing for that Hahaha!
Anyway - I was asexual for a bit - and I can't help but think that my unrealistic expectations played a role in finding real sex lacking in many things. Fantasy seems so much more appealing than what our earthly bodies and our limited energies.
All this to say - we get it- some sex in fanfics is unreal. We, or I, gloss over it and try to take the meaning the writer was trying to share.
Anyway write more!

I have no idea what you're talking about! I thought this was amazing though it was a little bit sadistic for my taste I personally prefer more of lovey dovey intercourse and just a bit of things you might think about changing (( I am a writer myself)) 1. Calm down with the description although you did a good job there was so much going on I found it hard to follow the story 2. Flashbacks should be short 'n' sweet in my opinion. Despite that this fanfic was an awesome read and I hope you do more!

really good fanatic one of the best I've read in a while! plz make a sequel to this fanatic until next time

This was definitely very hot! People sere warned about the lemons. To hell with them.
It was sensual and I am glad it was . Good work!

If you ever change your mind about a sequel, I'll be waiting :D