are you gonna continue this?

please write more soon!
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This is really awesome. I love the concet, the characters seem pretty IC, and Keiko seems like a fin sort of OC. The dialogue is a bit stiff, but otherwise, tis story is really amazing, and I hope you continue it. I'm also glad someone else shares my opinion of romance being way to common. Update PLEASE!

-Dyslexic Nerd

Haha, Firefly... I miss that show.

Great story! I would love to read more soon!

Firefly is awesome, and this fic is worthy of referring to it, so please update.

Haha I like it! I agree with your reasoning, there's just way to many sappy stories completely about romance. Keep up the good work!:)

Awesome story, please update soon. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. I for one am fine with a good ole friendship/drama/adventure fic. :)

update update update update! this is such a great story I've been looking for one like this and I agree on the no romance bit.

i really like where you are going with this! Keep it up

next update soon?

This is really good! I can't wait to read more!

Nice story!

It sounds interesting! I really like the flashback in capter two. Azula's right that Zhao looks like a monkey just like Zuko's right about him being a butt-head, lol.

I'm curious to what Sokka's gonna now he thinks Zuko "died". I don't think he really did because it's just the beginning of the story and Zuko's obviously one of the main characters

anywayz, I hope you update soon and good luck with writing more!

intresting story soo far. i'm interested to see where its going from here! great job, i hope you update soon!