I loved it, I hope the next chapter

Gosh, I feel a bit surprised yet also teary-eyed at your compliment... It's not every day that that happens. Thanks so much! I'm very glad that you've chosen to rewrite and even continue your story. It means a lot to me.

To be completely honest, I can't remember almost anything about what the chapters were like before you took them down. I've read so many stories that are similar to one another that they jumble together until it takes me a bit to remember. Not to say your story is similar to those I've read. It is on some level, obviously, but each story has its own uniqueness to it. I remember enjoying your story despite the confusion and chest-aching scenes (good and sad) that flashed into my mind!

I'm sorry for only now noticing this, about fixing the story. I had forgotten that you mentioned to me about remaking it. Like I said, horrible memory!... But I read your new first chapter and really enjoyed it. It's like a breath of fresh air with a hint of lung irritation from pesky pollen that soon goes away ' Meaning the very mild cliff hanger you left out there at the end. Make that reader wanting to see what happens next despite knowing the end result.

Hope to see more of your work, and thanks, again, for mentioning me! You're also welcome :)

-Tear

lol funny ending

Oh my god its been so long! Love the idea that you're rewriting this though, because you're not giving this up! Looking forward to the future chapters and hoping they won't take that long!

There's something offsetting and strange about your story. The fluffiness made me feel good but then there was the sudden depression about Kyo's situation. You kept going right from the good part to the bad. It really messes with emotions when that happens. It's like when you're in a bitter-sweet relationship with a guy where you two are happy one moment and then quickly upset with one another the next. And I'm very empathetic. But this story did not quite bother me in meaning that I could feel her pain and sorrow like I usually would in fics. Maybe it's because you did not get to explaining much about Kyo. There's literally next to nothing about her that I know. Idk if that's it or what I described earlier.

I'm wondering if it's a reason why you have more follows than favorites. Your followers are waiting to see if it actually amounts to something before choosing to whether or not favorite the story.

Kyo runs away from Ryoma because of her problem with Keigo and supposed marriage only to kiss him(Ryoma) in a sudden pitch of romance at the end of the chapter. In a way, it just doesn't add up. I'm quite confused by it all, I guess. Maybe you're leaving out small but important things you nor I know of.

-Tear

I love what you did!
i hope you continu

That was so cute and awesome x3 Is this discontinued D: Please update!

just asking, when did the prince get so temperamental?

-_- this is nice and all, but according to the "hot tempered girl" part, i was expecting Kyo to have kicked the boys in the ****s, after all, i accidentally kicked a boy in the b***s in 4th grade and then became pretty good friends with him.

Awwwww that was such a cute chapter! Ok now in the last chapter you mentioned that Kyo might have to marry Atobe? NOO! NEVER! ! _ That can't...CAN NOT HAPPEN! :P She and Ryoma are MEANT TO BE TOGETHER! :D :D :D :D :D :D I hope after that 'divorce' she can go to Seigaku, she'll probably like it better there as well . :D PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Awww so cute! _

this is cute ill read the rest later

bout time!

Waaaah! I want an update already! TToTT .

Interesting story!