I liked this a lot. I couldn't find the fanart you mentioned in the notes, but it was fairly easy to picture Pascha in my mind. I like the way you wrote their interaction - Pascha's interest was fairly obvious, but Kitty was the real character to watch, here. It's clear that after just the barest interaction her interest is really rising. The chemistry was great. I sort of wish you'd been able to make a multi-chaptered fic out of this concept, because watching these kids navigate their feelings and start a relationship would be pretty fun.

But, hey, thanks for writing as much as you did. It was a fun read.

-Orange

Wow this was really good. I liked how you switched Piotr up, it made the story just that much better. You are quite good at writing action scenes and I think I'll read more of your stories for inspiration when writing my own. Also I loved the idea of the Randam Doom DR sim. Do you think I could possibly use it in one of my own stories? If not thats totally cool. Once again awesome job!