Aw, brotherly love like no other.

Veggie pizza...bleh, not a fan of that. (No offense to anyone who is) Just need to have my meat! Talking about Pizza is making me hungry. XD

Really, it was a short, but cool chapter.

Can't wait for more! :D

That a boy, Sitaru! I'm liking it so far and I'm assuming the plot is gonna come really soon. The other thing I'm going to have to say that could be improved is the scene where Huey stopped the hijacker. Seemed kinda rushed. Other than that everything else has been entertaining and I want you to keep up the good work. Now that you've published and you're keeping a story active you have joined SapphireStones, MizzC, missingthepoint, MzMinni3 and myself as a part of the BOONDOCKS FANFICTION DYNASTY. BOONDOCKS FANFICTION UP, UP AND UP SOME MORE!

OH MY GOD I'M SO EXCITED! AHHHH! Lemme find out Juju can write. LOL.

Kidding. I'm literally getting kicked out the library right now, so I can't say all I wanted to, but it's wonderful. I'll elaborate next time I get on a computer. Keep it up! :)

-Kelsey

Huey seems to be mellow in this, and I never expected him to be in the military. I've always felt that Riley was more of the military brat in the pair, but you have your reasons for doing it. I'm not complaining.

Wow, Huey's so compassionate. He doesn't want anyone to get hurt, and I'm so "Aw, Huey's such a nice guy."

The lack of vicious animosity between the Freeman brothers is a first, but its only a matter of time.

The chapters may be short, but action is going on in them. As long as things are happening, I'm a happy camper. Well done!

Stop leaving me in suspense! i wanna kno wats gonna happen next.

shocking to read that huey save the day! he came a long way, since he was a kid.. not long enough chapie.

is chapter 3 called chappy 3?

AHHHHH! YOU WROTE SOMETHING! OH MY GOD! :D :D :D

I am immensely happy for the fact that you have beautiful grammar/spelling. You don't know how glad I am. It sounds weird but...you know. You KNOW you know.

Lordie, let me leave a real review...it was short, but it had impact. There's enough there to make you want to know what happens next. That and I'm a sucker for stories with characters in the military (no idea why). Either way, I'm excited. This is good. I want more. So...you should get on that. :P

-Kelsey

Can't wait for more! :D

it's a start

like the plot.. my 1st boondock story...