Reviews for Lunar Eclipse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() My God. I hail you. *bows* Amazing. Captivating. PERFECT. After reading the first line I began singing in with a tune I cannot for the love of life remember the name of. If it has one. XP *claps* This is one of the best poems I have -ever- seen. Love, Kae |
![]() ![]() ![]() Um... doesn't the disclaimer go with the poem? You're a brilliant poem writer, but... what's this for? There's a rule against chapters that don't have any story/poem in them. I don't know if this is breaking the rule or not, but I really hope not because I love your poem! I'm just a little confused... why in the world is the disclaimer both with the poem and here? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. That's all I have to say- Wow. I write Remus poetry, too, and I love reading other people's poems on the subject. But this is just- wow. A gripping poem. This is absolutely brilliant. Please write more! |
![]() ![]() Wow. Just...wow. You have definit talent. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::starts to clap:: that was really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW that was great! Very descriptive! I loved it! Keep up the great work! ~*Padfoot4ever~* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic poem! I love the style and rhythm. Great word choice. Your storytelling is excellent, and it even rhymes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, :) I think this is a great Poem to tell what Remus went through. I really enjoyed reading this, Great job! ;P -Lily Skylo |
![]() ![]() I really loved it, its so real you could feel like him for a moment, you are a great writer, your poetry is wonderfull, i saw some snape stuff ill go check it out, go girl! keep writing.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Now this emotion and poetry combined, beautiful. The feelings are very heartfelt and it gives you a sense of reality lingering in there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! this was really good! you're a great writer! keep going! ) btw, i've read you're poem about snape too, it's really good,but this one is the best... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent piece! Please continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wondeful poem. You're gifted! If only we could all write poetry like this! |
![]() ![]() Most excellent! You really have a gift for rhyming verse, you know that? Superb work! Cheers, Meir Brin |
![]() ![]() Another master piece; I read Snape's poem before this. You truly have a gift. |