The amount of spelling and formatting errors really distracts from the story.

This was made when I was two years old but I can say that 14 years in the future it's still very good! Didn't hunk I'd enjoy the lack of z fighters but it was better than most fanfictions I've read. Makes sense why it has so many reviews. :)

That was an amazing story.
Great job and keep it up

This story sucks ass

I should have taken note of the Agnst tag...

Wayy too much description for me but ahhh, the action/fight scenes/powering up are really the highlights of the story for me, as well as the exploring/history of other races.

Bojack is such a badass in this, his characterization is really good. Gohan needs to stop being a bitch and just transform somehow.

Fantastic so far, nice plot Gohan/Frieza wie, Bojack and Garlic Jr seem to be lacking as of chapter 6. A few gramatical mistakes but ahhh.

I really do like Gohan's character in this, hopefully he can destroy some enemies soon. The conversation about gene mutation was very interesting to read, hopefully Bojack,Frieza and Gohan will get new forms of transformation.

what about kid buu? he was literally created to destroy the universe and he's stronger than even cell, or was it the possibility that he wouldn't listen ?

This is an amazing story however there are copious amounts of spelling mistakes
An by the way ki not chi they are two different things ki is spirit chi is body

I don't really have much to say. Except great job! Saying this after a decade but i do think it's important to encourage authors no matter what. :D

are you not righting any more? because your last story must have bin on the 2005, since reding the some of the stories from the time you have righted this story, i can say to my friends that this story is mutch better.

This is in my top 5 fanfics of dbz all time! The journey you must have taken me and others on was amazing and I had to hold back a few tears on the last chapter but this will always stay in my head as one of the greatest fanfics!:)
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Yay! After 3 days of reading (this much because of 1 test per day at school D: ), I managed to finish reading this amazing story!
Very interesting the "42 chapter", where you explain what did contribute in the forging of the story, I think everyone should do it.
I have only one observation: Dragon Ball's characters are not "champions of psycological introspection" (as a friend of mine would say), so one does not expect to find entire chapters incentered on what the feelings/hopes/thougts/whatever of the characters are. I think this is why most Fanfic are the way you criticized.
Anyway, my observation is: you overdid it with the psycology. Yes, it's interesting, yes,I liked it and yes, it's fun to understand what our favorite players are thinking/feeling in every moment, but dammit, sometimes this completely stalls the plot! On the next project, you should, IMHO, find a better balance.
Outside that, well done! I'll continue supporting you!

Ps: sorry for my English

That story is soooooo deep...no joke.
Crazy good

This was such a amazing story , the ending nearly made me cry , we'll done