I pretty much die for Eric/Godric.

Legit.

Like,

I cried like a little girl when Godric allowed the sun to take him.

Anyway!

I enjoyed your Eric voice, and I thought you were very IC.

Godric was good as well.

I thought it was a nice little imagining of Eric's making.

Enjoyed your characterization and style.

XOXO

PS I kinda stalk writers' bio pages when I encounter a story I like and I thought yours was pretty fabulous.

PPS Why do you hate that you love Our Mother Monster?

;)

Sorry.

Hehehe

Gaga is my NO.1 obsession

What a simple, yet captivating vignette. I can picture that happening. It made me smile.

I think your short story description of Eric's turning is AMAZING. It was very real and extremely well written. Flowed perfectly and I could really feel his emotions. You did so good. You should write more about their relationship! :) I love them so much and would love to read whatever else you write about them

Thank you

*Jazmin

nice idea, i hope you will continue it...

I think there might be some confusion going on with other readers.. since there is already a story called "Heavy In Your Arms" being posted right now. I hope they don't overlook this though, but it really is quite good :)

Very short, I'd like to see you write more? I love the Godric/Eric relationship and everytime I get the chance to explore it, I jump on it, lol.

If I could give one critique.. it would be don't switch from past to present tense. In the first sentence you wrote: " ...damp earth was the first thing he remembers." The words "was" and "remembers" are two different tenses, so just keep that in mind. The sentence could have been phrased: " ...damp earth is the first thing he remembers" or "was the first thing he remembered." See what I mean? :)

Keep writing, I'll be looking!

~ Sierra