This entire story is excellent. The structure of the story is wonderful and makes me root for pan. I hope there is an update soon!

Beyond amazingly star struck! That is completely Perfect! or in french specifics, Say manufique!

This chapter was strictly perfect!

Excellent!

Excellent job with the whole chapter so far!

1,000% Pefectly Exciting of a story! I am looking forward to reading a lot more chapters bit by bit!

This is a good story, keep up the good work!

wow this is very good so fare and I know that I can't wait to see were this gose. But I do know that I will stick around to find out what will go on as this story gose on so I hope that you up date soon, and last but noe least keep up the good work

I love this story! Its very tare to find a story like this that is well written out with a good thought process and poor little pan I know she can do it and lol bra she is something I tell ya hard to believe she's a sayian

Bra is quite the little manipulator.

this is pretty good so far. update soon please

This story doesn't seem too bad , it has some potential to be pretty good, hope you can deliver in the future