Well done. Get rid of those knights.

This entire chapter had me close to tears.

This was great! The relationships between Leon and Arthur and Gaius and Arthur were gorgeously done. *applause*

Merlin: HISTORY HAS IT'S EYES ON YOU-
Merlin: AND EVEN THOUGH I LIE AWAKE, I KNOW HISTORY HAS IT'S EYES ON ME.
Arthur: I was younger than you are bow, when I was given my first command; I lead my men straight in to a massacre. I witnessed their deaths first hand.
Arthur: And i- wanna be in the room where it happened, the room where it happened!
Gwen: Look into your eyes and the skies are in, I'm being helpless!
Gwaine: Gemma Pell Laffayette the Lancelot of the reveloution -hdhd- I came from just to say bonsoir to the king who's the -bdhd- who's the best? -nxbdj-
Uther: You'll be back, time will tell. You'll remember that I served you well. Oceans rise, empire fall! We have seen each other through it all. And when push, comes to shove, I will send a fully armed batallian to remind you of my love da da da da da da da da diea diea diea da da da-
Merlin: *Screaming* THE WORLD TURNED UPSIDE DOWN! TH-THE WORLE TURNED UPSIDE Down-
Morgana: It must be nice, it must be nice to have Washington on your side(Arthur).
Merlin: I'm proud to be, your obedient servent (M.E)
Merlin: THE WORLD WAS WIDE ENOUGH, for both Hamilton and I. (Morgana and Arthur)
Everyone: Who lives who dies who tells your story-

What did you do to Percival! YOU ruined him!

Very much enjoyed this glimpse into the early days of Merlin and Arthur's friendship, and seeing Arthur grow so much into the prince we all love. Thanks so much for sharing!

Oh gosh...
This chapter was even better than the first! I loved the talks and the confrontation scene. And Leon being proud of Arthur... I absolutely love it!

I wanted a story just like this, and then I saw this one. Well done on the characters! I love that you included Gwen and Morgana as well as Leon. I love how you portrayed everybody, even the a$$hole OCs. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

This is so completely unrealistic.. the part where everyeone is taking it so lightly. Morgana was furious for like 3 seconds and then its all oh he's sorry and guilty and sad enough. And Merlin... he's a doormat. Its like Arthur is the prince so everyone forgives... no, sorry, doesn't even get angry at him.

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You do a very good job of keeping the characters' personalities accurate.

Once again, Loopstagirl, you have achieved another story with flying colors! I'll have you know that I am constantly on the lookout for stories written by you.
Do you know why?
It is because you tend to like the same types of stories that I do myself. You have a way of involking the mood of your characters.
Anyway, I was wondering if you could write one of those stories that involves some OC prince and his family coming to Camelot. I think you may have already written one, but I also think that I read already, so please do another one; I love those! Especially when THINGS start happening to Merlin! But then, who doesn't on this awesomely twisted website?!
Tanjoo berry mudd! (thank you very much);)

Very nice, thanks!

I really liked this! Had a great time reading it. Some very clever dialogue, you write. Well dine.

Brilliant! Loved this so much - so many cute moments and it made Arthur's transition from prat to king in the show a lot more realistic for me:) Love your work!