Great, but no sequel

Hermione dad is going to die

They had their daughter

PLEASE WRITE MORE OF THIS! It kind of amazes me that you are only a teenager, because this is one of the most amazing fanfictions I have ever read. Keep going! Also, if you were to write more, could you cover more on the creepy cloak dude? I am very interested to see where that is going. Thanks for taking time to read this!

Please continue this story. It is truly lovely that all students of Hogwarts are happy and contented with their life...

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Hello! Are you still active? I don't mean to sound rude, but although I enjoyed the plot of this story, I have found that there are a lot of errors concerning grammar and a few plot holes/inconsistencies. Could I edit this story for you? I could copy and paste the chapters into word or google docs and send them to you once I am done editing!

Sorry wrong link(it won't let me post another review on chapter 1)
Here
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I don't think that the first thing that I said went through but this is the gist of what I said: I liked the plot of this story, but there are a few irking grammatical mistakes and small plot holes. I had nothing to do this afternoon so I edited chapter 1. I can do the rest if you want because I have nothing better to do. By the way, there is a feature to that makes it (almost) impossible to copy and paste a link, unless you have an extension on your browser. Here is a list of Extensions for browsers: Chrome-RightToCopy, Firefox-RightToClick.

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sad

I hate Rita Sketter soooo much. I want to punch her.

Please update

Please update soon love this story

Brilliant! got me very emotional. For me the Best stories are the one that mess with my feelings (kind of masochistic I know) and you nailed it. Thanks for sharing / writing.