How this happened, I haven't the slightest... but the story is really funny.

I read through the chapter again, and somehow mistook the term "Grey Area" in the sentance "'My eyes!' she cried as she turned and ran away from the Grey Area. 'Have some pride!'" as "Gay Area." Again, I have no idea how I made that mix up.

The double-take I had when that happened was probably hilarious.

All of that aside, this story was - and still is - amazing. I love reading it, despite already knowing the ending.

Wow, I'm just recently gotten into Zemyx and I love it! You write this so well, and keep the characters is character so well. Reading your story inspiries me to try one of my own (I've never wrote a yaoi before XD).

Great story, i love it SO much and I can't wait to read the sqeual

I thought this story was adorable and sweet... Do I have to read the other one? I don't wanna see a tragedy... I don't want one of them to die... it would make me cry...

~Roxanne

Wow that was fantastic! I thought of a few title names for you

Destinys End

Enveloping Darkness

Yeah I know rubbish xD

Unlike your story, I really, really liked it, infact ill go read it again

You should write a sequel

AW :)

SO CUTE! I love this, this is awesome, HOLY CRAP! Im gonna read it again :)

Aw :)

I love all of Dem's nicknames for people, especially when he calls Saïx X-Face. And when he chirps at Axel? Kawaii to the extreme! I love you for writing this!

Over and out

-X

woohoo orgy! XD

to bad there wasn't any xemnas saix action but oh wells ;p

this was a really great story and i enjoyed it very much :D

the part with mansex was so freakin awesome, it was like awkwardd tiptoeing around him moment xp

vexen is taking half of zexions eyesight? :o oh snapple

so zexion actually listened to the little voice in his head, most probably wouldn't have XD

aww demmy's first kiss? so cute

great chapter ]

oh my sweet baby jebus! zexion pretty much told him he loved him! i thought that little bit "Then I'll stay by your side until the end of time." it was so amazing! it makes my lil fangirl heart jump for joy XD

and when will axel ever learn, don't mess with roxas after a icky mission p

anyways i can't wait to read the last few chapters, i really hope demyx gets his sight back

lol yeah demmy did do something kinda dumb. but he thought it was for the best for Zex! aww sweet lil demmy 3

thanks for putting the song name up - im pretty sure ive heard it before

aww yay reunited

"One more word and I will through you off this clock tower"

LOL OWNED BISHNIT!