"I love it when you call me young man," said Raguna slowly. "Oh Eriky-Eriky!", at that point I literally took some time off to laugh that one off. Great story btw! XD

imagine if raguna came across a shipload of whiskey! the whole town would be trapped forever! Really funny story

Raguna...stay back...! *Turns tail and runs*

Okay...I finally lost him...

I think he's drunk again...

Anywayyy...Hilariously disturbing, loved it all the same.

Keep up the good work, hmm?

LOL... Raguna seems reali funny... you hav great immagination. it'll be hard to top this one in the contest.. :)

Hahah Raguna is so funny when he is given whiskey! This sure is weird but it is really funny! Just imagine if Raguna did drink more... Great story! XD Good luck with the contest!

I found it rather humorously creepy. You get the idea that he'd have had half the town in there, had it been allowed to continue...

Best of luck in the contest!

Hahaha, that was good, well, now they know not to give Raguna any Whiskey, and if you do, he starts to act like Rena from Higurashi and kidnapps anything he finds cute, good story!