I thoroughly enjoyed this version, it's much sweeter, not as bitter as the other version. The other version had sweetness too, but this was far more peaceful.
And I fully support polyamory, so this is perfect! :D

love

Once again, semi-instant reconciliation rears its ugly head! Ridiculus, the most emotional individual would not be so receptive to that idea, the coldest of individuals would either abandon the other two or turn against them. I believe Nihlus, with al his strength of spirit, would rather kill himself than try and work out such a 'deal'.

Perhaps the other sequel for Strength of Heart makes more sense, then again, the fact that there are TWO sequels for the same story confuses me.

Now THATS what Im talking about!

Dear 'Hey',

Putting it in the description is like telling someone the end to a movie or a book they haven't seen or read yet. That's stupid. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy this A.U. and that's your right, but you don't have to insult it. Plenty of others liked it just fine, so in a way you're insulting them. I would have to ask you to not be so rude.

Also, being out of character is a point of view. It's more likely that agreeing to the situation would be out of character for the turians than Shepard. On top of that; IT'S A FANTASY! Sorry for shouting, but there seems to be a lack of understanding among some that not everything has to be by the book when people are writing stories based on imagination rather than what's handed to them on a pillow by the game story line. Thanks.

I like you writing and everything, but I seriously think the whole Shepard dating two turians is just so stupid. It's too out of character, and you should add that to the description.

An incredibly sad but still kind of happy ending to a great series. The flashback in the end left me breathless, it was painfully emotional. Great work!

this is...now too sad...but i understand you have to end it...great now i gotta get started on my stoires...

Simply amazing end for these series. Surely, I didn't think about something like that when I was reading "Eclipse of the Heart".

beautiful...no other words needed...

I still love this story. I look forward to each new chapter, even when Nihlus and/or Garrus make me want to smack them upside the head.

NNNOOOOOO! whyd you stop there!

And I thought it would be 33,333333333333333333333333 %.

when do we get into the labor part? im so bored...

I'm telling you, the one name i set you. then again I set three of them, lol.

Oh Garrus