Cute.

This was great. I laughed when I figured out who Tom is. haha

That was beautiful...truly utterly beautiful!
I also loved how you added a sane tom in it, he was hilarious!
Anyways this was a great fanfic, good job!

Ciao~!

cool

Interesting concept, but there are some large holes that aren't explained, which makes accepting everything very difficult.

Just what did Hermione, Ron, and Ginny do that were so very horrible, resulting in Harry leaving the wizarding world. Show us, don't just give some vague allusion to it.

Why did no one notice Harry's absence? That doesn't make sense if they watched every move he made before he defeated Voldie.

How did Tom and Harry escape after the battle? Everyone would have wanted to see the dead Voldemort to be sure of his death.

How did Harry forgive Tom?

Why did Draco say he had been looking for Harry?

How did Harry James Potter become Hadrian James Orion Potter-Black?

So many unanswered questions.

This had a promising start but turned out pretty awful. Try not moving around so much of the plot and try making the plot slower. Nice try though.

I like your story :).

This was a bit disappointing. We never learn just what Hermione, Ron or Ginny did. Dumbledore apparently survived the war, but then Draco had him killed? Just like that? I'm left scratching my head at all the things this story doesn't have.

Draco didn't say why he was looking for Harry and there's no reason for Harry to return to the wizarding world even disguised.

Good story.

I like

Great fic love it

Harry being revealed and then after much encounters with people and confrontations, he and Draco have children. Adoptation or Mpreg should be fine, right?

Hi there! I loved this story you got here! Ron and Hermoine are such jerks, glad that's over with. Yay, Harry and Draco are together and can live happily now.

that was fantastic:3 XD XD 3