I personally never read an Akatsuki x Zero fic, I think this was a really good way to get into this pairing. The characters seem so in character so far and your writing is so goood!

You know, as I read this story I find myself not caring about Zero and caring a lot about Aidou. Like something major happens and then you cast Aidou aside to put in a scene with Kain and Zero. It doesn't really work.

I LOVE KAIN/ZERO

Beautiful. This was a truly wonderful story. Enjoyed reading it. I like seeing Zeros emotional side. I also like Kain as a character. Usually it's Kaname/Zero stories, but this was refreshing in the huge world of fan fiction.

This was an absolute pleasure to read. I love the relationship you built between Akatsuki and Zero. Good Work!

Wow.

This is pure amazing!

I absolutely loved this story it was written beautifully. I mean the way it was done had me thinking it was an actual book.

its seems like a cool story. i really did start singing killing me softly

Old yes. But hey who cares. Best yaoi I have ever read, and believe me I have read many.

Dear author , this piece of yours , this story of yours , as I will say it , is un expectable ... Amazing , it's creative . New . Fresh . The words you're using , the phrases you put together , how you describe it all .. You made these words dance on a restrictive rhythm , it's complete .. I love it , I wish you all the best , you're a good , no a great writer , keep it this way or even better,
Yours , STH

OH GOD THIS IS SO LONG MY HEAD NEARLY BURTST FROM READING FOR 5 AND HALF HOURS

friends and I love the story and I suppose u r having funny writing the cliff hangers

chapter 7 liked it and u have my forgiveness

love the story so far up 2 chapte don't thing u care though but I loved it same with my friends they r up 2 chapter 20 (their fast readers) and they love it