I really enjoyed reading this. The tone was light and entertaining, the cases varied and never boring, and of course their interactions were simply exellent! (And I can't deny my unending affection for Eames/Arthur!) Thanks for writing and sharing!

I love this story so much I don't even have the words. It does a marvelous job of satisfying my desire for awesome capers without having to spend a long time laying groundwork. Just Ariadne, Arthur, and Eames doing what they do best: being awesome. Once you factor in the adorable established Arthur/Eames relationship, it's basically everything I could ask for.

"Are you quite certain you work for Saito?" Eames asks.

Hiro snorts. "Yeah, four months now."

"Is Saito angry with us?" Eames glances at Arthur and Ariadne.

had to stop reading to say that is the best line ever 3 by line, i mean the last one.

That was so good and so long! Took me a while to ge through it, but it was definately worth it. The action scenes were very well written and the dynamics between Arthur, Eames and Ariadne were awesome.

This, is reeeeeaaally long. lol Took me a while to read.

But... I liked it. Nice job.

Love, love, loved this! I can't even really think of anything constructive or even witty to say because I'm too busy grinning and re-reading P Any hope for a sequel or series?