Reviews for In the Shadow of the Flames
Guest chapter 6 . 5/17/2011
That was wonderful! I love this take on Celena re-integrating her personality-very optimistic. I really liked Celena and Allen's conversation in the middle of this chapter, and the end was quite moving. One bit of advice-in a couple of places in the dialogue, you forgot to start a new line when a new character was speaking, and it made it hard to follow who was talking. All the characterizations were-well, if not precisely the way I would have written them, at least obviously in-character. I especially liked "Queen Millerna"-awesome. Loved this fic! Thank you!
Darje chapter 6 . 1/17/2011
I wasn't sure if I would enjoy any Escaflowne fanfiction, since the series felt very complete and didn't leave me dissatisfied with any of its plot points. However, this fic was very fulfilling as I had been wondering what would happen with Celena. I appreciate the smaller details thrown in there about post-war activities taken by the involved nations. While I usually enjoy more meat in the fanfiction I read, this was very good.
Celenas chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
Great start so far! I really like your Celena. I definitely look forward to reading more. :D
escaru chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
I cannot believe that no one has reviewed this yet. This is really a gem of a story, and at this point I await each new chapter with baited breath. I absolutely adore what you're doing with Celena here- I have never before seen someone write her as a competant young woman who not only remembers her past, but seeks to use it for the greater good- and believe me, I've been trying to find such a story for years. I am eternally grateful for your writing talents. Please keep up the fantastic work.