good story

Was the last paragraph even necessary? Really? They get attacked by one lone biker. On the way home.

You raised my hopes so high with all this talk of a surprise attack.

Nice story,

It started out nicely with Kim and Ron getting ready for the reunion, and continued well with them conversing with several of the old classmates. You also did great with Josh's part in which he hopes to reconnect with Tara.

However, the story seems rushed towards the ending, and the ending paragraph appears very jammed in.

I'm sorry to have to say this, but the final part has a highly amateurish appearance, far below the usual quality you put into your stories. It's a wall of text with an ending I usually find with writers who don't really put effort in their story but just want to get it out there.

Don't let this get you down too much though, and keep up the good writing,

reader101w

More delightful reading material from your talented mind.

I did enjoy Brick's story. He has finally found his purpose in life and is doing everything in his power to achieve it. He also comes across as a more insightful person than the few snippets we see him in the show.

I especially loved the Kim and Ron moments. they were very touching and right in character with the both of them. Ron stepping up with the comments to Tara and the others shows that he has matured beyond the lovable goofball we all knew. Thankfully he hasn't lost all his 'childlike wonder'. He wouldn't be Ron then.

Kim is still Kim. And we are all thankful for it.

I liked the end with Ron dishing out some punishment to the bad guy. Nice way to end the day for Team Possible huh?

Well Slipgate this one explains a lot of the other one.

Good Job,

Larry (Sentinel 103)

this was really good. like your other reunion story. i wonder y bonnie didnt come to the reunion though.

Hope it's entered for consideration...

A little bit of trepidation from Ron while a flash from the Bermuda Triangle past enroute there, huh? Well he and Kim were 50/50 on that presumption. It came out in the end and a good time was had by all, and the Ronster...

Brick's moment was interesting here. Rough life after high school, but he's making his own way and may do alright as he goes on.

Tara kind of got an interesting ball rolling about the rings, especially when it was easily noted the entrance of Kim and Ron was a bit at odds from another well known entrance to the same building 6 years earlier. But the explanation went a long way, on top of the pair's life since graduation.

Looks like the blonde is reconnecting as Karma dictates, just like Ron says...

Ron has really matured here and I think Kim really appreciates that very much. Some respect for him from his tormentors and that 'battle' at the end didn't leave him feeling low either.

Nice shouts for inspiration and direction. We're a font of such here and I don't think anyone minds...

LOL!

CB73

Aw, so many nice moments in this;

Kim reassuring Tara to live at her pace, and not to compete with the Stoppables, as it were :) My favorite bit, I think.

Seeing other faces like Brick, Zita, Felix ... very nice.

Cute, Ron beating up the motorcycle thug as a closer.

Thanks for the read!

Take it and run,

Ha. Nice to see this, Slipgate. So does this link up with your other reunion story? or is this separate? Curious because I sort of hoped the Tara/Josh thing would end up working out here in this 'universe', Haha.

Anyway, keep up the awesome work, buddy! Really loved the ending here. At least the thug didn't bug them at the actual reunion.