Great story, pity it seems to have been abandoned. Compared to the lame (as Tapping thinks) Sam/Jack endless stories, it's VERY refreshing to see something different. Well done!

Awesome.

I have to make a guess right here. Since they (SG-1) found the challenge coin in a stream but Frank still has it in this chapter, I'm betting the time dialation sent him back in time... Great story overall so far and am really enjoying it.

there haven't been many good stories recently so having story alerts keeps me updated on the ones I like to read. please keep writing.

I really like this story, but am confused here. When Cromwell got ejected out the gate did it throw him back in time? I,m assuming Ra is still alive. So it would probably be ten years into the past. Because the Tauri would be mentioned sometime. I'm quite intriqued. Please update soon.

Glad life is continuing to treat Cromwell well. His and Tesni's kid can be an interesting addition to the story.

I liked the little snippet about the Tok'ra Sholan trying to manipulate Bel :)

It has been raining on P2A-870 for four years now. Just thought that was funny.

Good idea with the training scenarios!

Reading that the storm is still going got old. Skipped to Ch 60, storm still on, yawn... abandon story.

good luck, good for you, best wishes, well done, review nice update

Glad you're back, and congrats on the life changes!

Gah, the tension is killing me! The coin they found in the river really confused me, since Tesni gave it back next chapter or so, but I figured it out a few chapters later based on the SG1 hints and the update on Tok'ra politics. I really gotta wonder what they're gonna do when they figure it out... Seems like he might be a bit beyond their reach. :/

Nice start. Haven't watched this episode in a while, maybe I should do so again soon.

Onto reading some more!

Wow. I thought that I did a lot of research for my stories. This looks interesting.

its been nice to find thid story again after a few years. Many hours reading the past 50 chapters this past few weeks has left me wondering where does the time go. Took awhile for me to get use to the slow pace of the story, even though a year and a half has already passed. Lokking forward to the next chapter. Please keep writing.