It just ain't right without jessie.

is that the 300 reference?

Ok I wanted to write a review of the 1st couple of chapters but decided to wait til I finished the whole story. THIS STORY IS AMAZING! I loved your take on the whole Tactics story. I've been looking for a good Ramza fic for a long time. I thought The Reluctant Hero was a great start but thats pretty much dead and the Lion has filled that void completely. Everything was great. I didnt know how I was gonna feel about Ramza and Mel but the way you developed her is what actually drew me in. I was a little bit sad you didnt pair Ramza with Agrias. I wont lie i was angry with you about Agrias that she just fell in with Delita but i was blown away how you developed her and Zelbag. Everything in this story was awsome the battles, the way romance was developed, the actual feeling of despair, THE TWINS! O MY GOSH THE TWINS were great. I almost stopped reading the story when they fell. Took almost a whole day for me to continue lol. I think you should do a side story on Mastudio and the Twins lives as pirates. Though I was sad and wished for a happy ending I still got some closure. I could Feel Mel's heart breaking when she screamed out no when the fortress started falling. For me, you have set the standard for all Tactics fics. On a scale of 1 to 10 you get a perfect 11 cant wait to read what you put out next!

Definitely deserves more reviews!

Wow. I started this today, and couldn't stop until the end. Excellent, simply amazing.

Aww this was wonderful! :3

Thanks for writing this great fanfic!

I really like your version of Gafgarion.

"One does not simply walk into Igros"
Heh! I see what you did there. ;)

Also, holy whoa I am really enjoying this so far!

"One does not simply walk into Igros"

I lol'd so hard! This fanfic is amazing!

Yeah it was IV, nice use of other FF characters

Thank you for writing this. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Well, that was a fine story. Thank you for sharing it.

Boom, there goes the robot, taking out a Lucavi and a half, thus saving the day. Well, mostly.

Elmdore is down and Cid is avenged, while Reis saves her beloved in a way that can only be described as TOTAL PWNAGE. As to Ramza, it's quite the dark homecoming for him.

With all the assorted and crazy shit going down in this chapter, it is Mustadio getting both twins macking on him that really sticks out for me. You the man, Mustadio!