Loooooooove!

That was lovely, really lovely. Thanks for sharing.

Nicely done.

;)

So sad that Charlie died.

This was written quite well.

Thank you.

Like your other stories, I liked this one a lot too! It really tugged on the heartstrings and it was so well written that I could almost close my eyes and see what was happening.

I can't wait to see what you write next!

My gosh!

that was an incredible journey... really moving and so believably beautiful!

very nicely handled and sensitive to a sad time!

well done!

THE STORY FLOWS SO WELL. YOU CAN'T HELP TO BE DRAWN INTO THE CHARACTERS. BRAVO!

I loved this story! Beautiful use of third person omnipotent POV! Had you put it in either or both Bella and/or Jasper's POV, it would have either doubled the length or lost half of their story. I have often wondered why so few fanfic writers use this POV. It's really freeing and let's the overall story the primary focus rather than individual characters. Great job!

Aww, they do belong together, more so then canon, what was Meyer thinking anyway? An equal partnership, a mate, does not control you, does not make you completely submissive that you aren't you anymore. Now, the whole BDSM thing is a different story.

This is brilliant, I am so excited that you continued it! Everything about it was just lovely and the charecterization was perfect. Looking forward to checking out Recovery now :)

Adored it!

Lov it

Hahaha loved it!

Beautiful oneshot :)