Reviews for Venus and Mars
bibibi0510 chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
totally love it
spontaneouslovee chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Awww. I could TOTALLY picture this happening in the movie. Loved it.
Xthereal-meX chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
loved it! i wish this happened in the movie though! great one-shot! :D
LoveShipper chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
I so wish that happened in the actual movie. Wonderful job
hockey.helmets.forever chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
so cute
duckvader23 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Wow, this is amazing! I love this!
PurpleStar94 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Aww this was cute! Where did it take place in the movie,like after what part. Great job on this!
thatgingerprincess143 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
"Kiss me."

why why did she have to say that and go all bella swan on him WHY. im sorry but i absoultly hate it when girls say to a guy "Kiss Me"

but despite that little annoyance(curse you kristen stewart)

all in all it was an AH MAZING story

i was mad not to late wasnt in the movie i saw like a few good spots where it culd have been
BloodySundays chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Aww, why wasn't this in the movie?

Really amazing one-shot. Loved it. :D
ASLaddict chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
L. O. V. E. It! Sokol good! I thought the ending in the movie was really abrupt for that scene, and I wish so bad that the scene u wrote had replaced the simple slamming of doors ;)
oxcal704 chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
brilliant. i loved it. :)