Poor Hardison-all freaked out and no one around to help. And you killed me with the line about protecting his soul! Great work!

Oh my god I LOVE THIS! So hilarious and so dramatic at the same time. You wrote it perfectly. Hardison and Parker were especially spot on-Hardison looking skyward and not risking his soul-omg I died laughing ahaha! Awesome Eliot writing and Nate totally has that dad voice lol. Awesome job. Love it. Thanks for writing!

He fainted

Fantastic Hardison voice! Spot on!

I liked it - humorous, familial and best of all, in-character. Good work.

ROTFL, I love it :D

Liked this.

This was well on the way to being a serious drama filled H/C fic (which i love by the way) until...

"YOU WANNA PLAY CHICKEN WITH ME? BRING IT!"

BWAHAHAHAHAH! that was funny as! - loved it! -

people are looking at me funny...

probably shouldnt read fanfiction at work

thanksyou so much for sharing this one.

going to go and look for more now

This has to be the most in character story I've read for this fandom. You have the characters and dialogue spot-on! Especially Hardison, who is pretty hard to write. Best line ever: "Not cool, man. Not cool. How am I supposed to drag your ass out of here? You eat your Wheaties, dude. I eat Froot Loops for breakfast."

Awesome!

I liked, well shared. Voices on everyone dead on. Even as little as Eliot said it was easy to see him.

Too funny. You had me at your description.

This was great. I love the "fainted like a fangirl at a Justin Bieber concert" line. It was perfect.

Great job!

Great job! All of the character's voices sounded like they do on the show, I could tell which one was Eliot, which was Hardison, etc. Very good job

that was great loved it

That was brilliant :) In fact my only complaint is that it wasn't longer since I was enjoying it so much.

You really captured everyone's voices perfectly, particularly Hardison and Parker. I laughed out loud more than once and this bit was definitely my favourite as I could literally hear/see Elliot and Hardison as I was reading;

Hardison shook his head. "Nuh uh. No way, man. You were out. All damsel in distress with the vapors or somethin'. Do I look like Rhett Butler to you? No. I do not. You gotta tell me when you're gonna faint on me next time. That was not cool. Not cool. I almost didn't catch you, you know."

"I didn't faint," Eliot growled.

"Oh you fainted. Like a fangirl at a Justin Bieber concert. It was— There was definite fainting going on."

"I didn't faint!" Eliot snapped.

Priceless!

It's funny but I only just now noticed the name of the person who wrote this and it explains why I enjoyed it so much since I have several of your 'Supernatural' stories as favourites. I'm glad to see you write just as well for the 'Leverage' gang and I'd love to read more of those in the future.

That was awesome :)) especially Parker. I'm a sucker for Parker fics that actually capture a bit of how she behaves, lol. Good job!