Love to the story it’s crazy awesome! Hope you can update Life lessons and growing up soon

I'm no critic, but if fanfictions were aloud to become real books, I would make this a real book

I was literary on the verge of tears, i'm a sensitive person sometimes. AND DEATH THE KID, I LOVE HIM.

I FEEL LIKE I'M GOING TO EXPLODE

I feel so sorry for Kid having to leave Maka after they technically confessed their felings for each other. :-[

i loved the ending of this chapter,so kawaii

At first,i thought there was only three chapters,cause i skimmed over how many chapters there were, then i looked again when i clicked on something else. i was like, HOLY SHIT!

This is a very good story. It's so interesting and so well developed. It's got so much suspense in some ways and other's a lot of action or fluff. It's awesome. Please continue!

i like your story its good i hopd u can finsh the next chapter :-)

Any1 else think Serena snds like a goth Maka

It wasnt good
It was the greatest
SYMMETRY IS BEAUTIFUL

Yay a little shinagami is comin
Poor Maka ima man so i hav no idea how painful that is
SYMMETRY IS BEAUTIFUL

8 IT'S SOOOOOO SYMMETRICAL YAAAAAAY!
Love it your a great writer but the chapters are too short
SYMMETRY IS BEAUTIFUL

P...pr...pre...PREGNAT!THAT'S WHAT I GET FOR HAVING DRUNK UNPROTECTED SEX!I'M SORRY MAKA I DID NOT MEAN TO GET YOU PREGNANT!
I've always wonderer since Kid is an extantion of Lord Death's soul that if Kid got some1 preg would that baby be full or halve shinagami cause the way they explain it there saying that Kid is just a small Lord Death clone
Great story SYMMETRY IS BEAUTIFUL

YA MORE KID & MORE KIDxMAKA
I love your story
SYMMETRY IS BEAUTIFUL