Lovely early Lisbon-Jane interaction. Thanks for the enjoyment.

Lol :D Loved it!

Thanks for the very good read

Love it! I want more of this!

This is so lovely, and completely in character! I had a smile on my face the whole time, thank you for writing it :)

Very lovely! :) love the banter! :)

ooh poor Patrick! :)

"as my brother suggested 'sewage coloured', delightful thought" -
Gotta love brothers, eh?

This was truly excellent. I feel you nailed the characters and their reactions just right. Well fine.

This is really awesome. Please don't stop. I really would love to read chapter 3 like right now. .

its interesting...:D

"The Mentalist" is my FAVORITE TV show. I think it's brilliant, and the premise to THIS little story just looked so funny, I had to check it out. Nicely done! Quite hilarious, especially Lisbon's initial reaction. ;)

I read this once, and you have no idea how long I have been searching for it once more.

And now I've found it, it has not disappointed my expectations!

Thank you for writing it! c:

I know this is meant as a comedy, but I hate Jane in this. Mocking a disorientated vulnerable Lisbon is harsh. This is not a criticism of your writing skills. The story is in character and wonderfully paced. Maybe i'm just a humourless saddo. Oh well.

"Your face looks like a porcupines rear end!"

haha Lisbon..(:

you got the characters spot on! I do so dearly hope you will update soon..