My feels... I'm not sure whether I should be happy because this was so cute, have a nosebleed & squeal because of the sex scene, or cry in sadness because Luka actually dies. Either way, tears came to my eyes when I read the very last sentence. I wish Luka and Jim didn't die. :(

OMG I'm speechless! The ending was cute as! I LOVE ALOIS (I mean Jim) SO MUCH and Luka is cute AS!

AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWW HOW CUTE PLEASE MAKE MORE OF LUCA & JIM PARING ITS SOOOOO CUTE

Awwwhh, the last line made me cry a little :'(

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*Cries on the name Luka*

I couldn't help but go..."Awwww" at the end :3 It was great 3

This was so cute! It was very well written and the smex was hot~~! 3

CUTE ;/;

Omigosh i loved it! lol finally theres an m rated aloisxluca fic. :D ...i am such a shota freak e_O ahem!...anyways i dont think jim and luca are related, arent they just friends?

LIKE OMG

I LOVED THIS

JUST

I'VE BEEN CHECKING CUZ I'VE BEEN WANTING TO READ A LUKA AND ALOIS FIC

SINCE I NEVER GOT TO FINISH MY ROLE PLAY WITH MY ALOIS :'D

Okay great story (though I always pictured Luca to be at the most 8 yrs old and Jim to be at the most 10 when Luca died but w/e)

And I cant believe they still didnt add Luca to the characters list! I made a request and emailed them on monday but they still have yet to respond! Grrr...

But great story! :) Even though I'm sorta against 8 yr olds losing their virginity xD

Hot damn that was smexy awesome! Not enough for Luca so I'm glad you wrote this...ohh any possiblities of a sequel? My favorite line was 'clinging to one another, the forbidden lovers met their peak, crying out in esctasy.'

-Arteset