I am sinking in cute fluffiness!

Well that was really not bad I just think the part with Paul could be a little more funny.

This is the best... ha ha, Paul Shinji the fairy godmother... love this story!

Since I was studying Maths, my review would be Maths - styled
To find: A new story
Given: Request by Lizzie
Solution: Ash's mind Cinderella 'Cinderella's story with different names'
Hence proved, Elizabeth is smarter than Ash

Paul as fairy God mother! Hilarious

Cindrella story in pokemon style !
Its a sweet one shot

BWAHAHA PAUL AS A FAIRY GODMOTHER!I'm telling Dawn!

Really Paul? Really nice story. Although I expected the fairy godmother to be a bit snarkier.

HAHAHAHAHA! XD That was awesome! And Paul as the fairy godmother? Too much for words!

all the props for making Paul the fairy godmother. Loved it

so cute!

I knew it was Paul! *Cracking up* Aw, Poor, spitefull guy! You dressed him as a fairy! XD

this was a sweet and funny fic

I wish I had got to this sooner, oh well.

I liked this, I liked how you took the "Let's make a shipping story out of a classic fairy tail" cliche and made it into kind of a parody. It wasn't a full blown parody, but this is a good example of why ripping off random plots that everyone's heard before and just changing the names doesn't make for a very good fic. Sorry Ash. XD

Part of me wishes that you had made it a full blown parody, and thrown in things like Paul's personality, if he was the smartass PO'd hates his job fairy godfather, I think I would have ROFL'd. XD But you didn't, and that makes Elizabeth's explanation of why Ash's story sucked, hilariously funny on its own.

Very nice. I sort of wish the Fairy God Mother was Harley instead.