Ooh, I love the idea of Matt intervening and getting Rory to see how much Jess still loves her. This was so sad and sweet and lovely, nice work!

I think this might be my most favourite jess and rory tale ever. Beautifully written.

Great. Now I can't breathe because I'm crying so much. Thanks.

I kno this story was written awhile back, but the angst and emotion was ridiculous. I got all tense and my heart sped up. Very well written.

That was simply beautiful They really needed their act four on the show. i always kinda hoped they would end up together and that would be a perfect way

"Don't worry, he's going to be dead shortly, you don't need to bond."- I loved that line, haha. I also loved the story that Jess wrote, that was written beautifully, I loved it.

Loved it. So cute. Nailed them.

Brilliant. So well-written and heartbreaking and perfect. I am in love with your stories.

You keep doing it! I may be reading them completely out of order, but somehow you keep making each story more devastatingly wonderful than the last!

INCREDIBLE

That's the only word for it. Your writing is so concise and incisive. You write straight to the heart of the story. Straight to my heart too.

Jess and Rory needed an act two...just look how many people have been trying to write one for them. :)

I love, love, love your writing.

That badboy's just been favourited.

THIS IS MY NEW FAVORITE JESS/RORY STORY!

Really clever idea. Loved Jess's story. so heartbreaking.

But i especially loved the ending. im such a hopeless sap... but im okay with that :)

thanks for writing! oh and did i mention that i just love this story so much? because i really do :)

good story

Wonderful!

I don't usually like these two together but the story works. I like the piece that was supposed to be Jess's writing.

Wow. That pretty much sums it up. The story that Jess wrote was heartbreaking, it really moved me. Great little one-piece, thanks for sharing!