I'm just happy that Dean and John were reunited in the beginning of this story. I'm also happy that Dean was rescued from that planet. I'm happy that they are going to be ok. Please write more crossovers with stargate Atlantis.

To short! To short! To short! Have you written more? Please tell me you have written more!
Thank you for sharing a great story!

I'd like to point out that in all likelihood those scars will always stand out from the rest of his skin. Over a year ago I cut myself shaving (yes shaving, I was shaving my legs and my razer caught on an older cut and pulled up a lot of skin. It looks like a burn now.) And I'll probably live with that scar forever, and that's nothing compared to what you dished out for Dean.

will u b writing a sequel to this?

Interesting! I wonder when Dean will figure out about Atlantis's sentient presence in his head~. No knowledge of the supernatural at all? Or does the supernatural not exist in the Supernatural sense in this 'verse?

awwwww i wish there was more - this is the first fic of this fandom I have ever read and I totally loved it! can't wait to read more! totally loved it!

please think about continuing this story. so far it sounds really awesome. plus i think it'd be great to see what certain people thought about this particular realtionship. and does Dean have the ATA gene or was Atlantis just reaching out to him because of john?

Please, PLEASE, get a beta reader, or at least put your text through the Word dictionary, because this is just painful to read. I undestand not being a native speaker, really I do, I'm not either, but it's a shame because the story has an interesting premise but each time I try to read it I can't get further than the first chapter before I have to quit.

It looks like the plot may be good, and just a little more work would do wonders.

Try it and don't give up

Get a beta.

Items that belong to someone are "possessions", what you have: "posestions" is not even a word.

"Dedlus" should be "Daedalus", after the mythological figure.

These are extremely basic mistakes, and they're in the very second sentence of the fic. Not a good way to encourage people to continue reading, especially if they can see from the offset that they're going to have to struggle through many basic spelling errors to try to figure out what you're attempting to say.

If you can't run a spellcheck, then get a beta. It's worth it, because then people won't be reviewing about basic grammar, they'll be able to understand enough of your story to give you feedback on plot and character development.

You have some really serious spelling issues.

Firstly, it's the Daedalus, named for the father of Icarus.

hundreth should be hundredth

posestions should be possessions

Concret should be concrete.

Emarqment should be embarkment

Cuncusion should be concussion.

accedent should be accident.

instently should be instantly

Irac should be Iraq

devistated should be devastated

That's only for two paragraphs which makes it REALLY hard to read this. The site has a spellchecker as do most internet browsers. There really isn't an excuse for the quantity of spelling mistakes. I think the story has a lot of good ideas but its really difficult to get into with the technical mistakes you are writing.

Your spelling is horrible. You seriously need a beta but much of this could be improved if you would just make use of your spell checker.

Awesome update I loved how you played out Dean finding out John never died. And how you made Dean somewhat hard and cold in Weir's office was excellent -

~Tala-Paige~

VERY interesting crossover story, I so cannot wait to see what will happen. Please update it soon -

A couple questions though:

Was Mary still killed by Azazel? And if she was, does Dean still know about the supernatural?

Last thing...When in Stargate: Atlantis does you story take place?

~Tala-Paige~