Reviews for End of the Beginning
myafroatemydog chapter 3 . 4/13/2018
Pretty great chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 2 . 3/21/2018
Pretty epic follow up chapter
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 3/21/2018
Interesting first chapter
xoanmeira chapter 4 . 7/2/2017
Please continue this story. I love it so much :(
WHITEOUT180 chapter 4 . 4/13/2016
update update
Mr. Aanonymous chapter 1 . 1/22/2016
are there any actual lemons to this story?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2015
You should definitely continue this. Into mass effect 3 and after.
Godogma chapter 4 . 12/17/2014
Hmmm...

I see a ME3 beginning coming up... and I don't like it.

I didn't buy the bullshit they were tossing out there in the game and if it's focused on in a fic I quickly hit the X button. It was stupid writing when the authors of the game came up with it and the games became progressively more lackluster after Mass Effect...

ME3 was a glorified FPS game tacked around the Mass Effect universe and I've always wanted my money back and the hours of my life spent playing it.

I hope when you continue this; if you continue this the stupidity from the beginning of ME3 is thrown to the wayside. Or John just shoots certain stupid people.

He doesn't work for the Alliance anymore and NOBODY seems to grasp that. When he became a Spectre the only authority they had over him was the authority he gave them and I really couldn't buy a whole lot of the plot from the series that came afterward.
littlechiqui chapter 3 . 6/4/2014
I know this is an old story but its soooo good. I hope there will be an update in the future! (wishful thinking)
SakuBloss chapter 3 . 2/11/2014
And the intrigue continues to ratchet up! :D
SakuBloss chapter 2 . 2/11/2014
Another excellent, and fully detailed chapter :D
SakuBloss chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
Oh, how much I love this story, let me count the ways... 8D
provonchas chapter 4 . 1/12/2014
WHE ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS GREAT STORY?
Lord Schmodder chapter 4 . 9/2/2013
Wow.
This is a very nice written fic with a very cool perspective on the story.
I really like this!
Thank you for posting!
Icynutt chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
Just read your story and must say I am impressed.

It may be Bioware gave birth to the Mass Effect universe, the storyline and its characters but I'll just say your are by far a better parent.

Keep up the good work - and I do hope there is more to come regarding "End of the Beginning".
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