Poor naruto that is why I hated Sasuke and Sakura

I so confused naruto is a girl and hinata is a boy. Naruto is sposst to be shy so how is she the loudest konoichi and hinata is brash

Though I quite like this story, I find it a odd that Hinata and Naruto seemed to have switched personalities. Still, this is fun to read.

it's so pathetic!

In response to the beating thing I am just going to point this out. Naruto is still a Jinchuuriki with a seal that triggers in response to life-death situations and extreme anger(until it becomes a mental thing to do as in shippuden(even then)) . Therefore beating, which being a child, would more likely than not trigger that and result in a mass slaughter of the civilians and everything else chunin and below(if not jonin). The Sandaime being Hokage has a duty to the village first and wouldn't allow that. Therefore it is very unlikely beatings never happened for that very reason.

it takes way to long to finally start the chapter. I mean it is almost half of the page before it starts

man you have to stop doing those little ( hello I'm an author) notes mid story. They completely ruin the flow of the story and are annoying if you keep describing characters or little bits of information most people already know, and for those that don't just set a separate section at the bottom of the chapter with all of it.

Kill yourself, virgin loser.

Yep Hinata's dad is still an ASS WIPE

i really really like this story evenn though you are not satisfied wit it, it it think it was really good can't wait for the rewrite thought

What's taking so long for you to write another chapter?

I mean, come on? We've been waiting for you to write this all this time!

Ok one: WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED HERE I MEAN THESE ARE EIGHT YEAR OLDS ACTING LIKE 16 YEAR OLDS I MEAN SERIOUSLY AND ALL THAT CRAZYNESS I MEAN WHOA!

And 2 Im glad Ino did what she did shes a sweet awesome girl.
And lastly despite all the craziness in the class Naruto has a great Christmas with his loved ones. How sweet.

Waiting for the rewrite...

hey Uzumaki rick just wondering about the rewrite I love this new take on naruto since I never thought that naruto could be portrayed as a shy type since his parents are anything but. and I greatly enjoyed this story If you could give me a date on when your going to start the rewrite that would be wonderful just PM if if you feel like it thanks.

Huh... That went better than i thought it would. I look forward to teh rewrite.