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Omg! Its Angel from Maximum Ride! You clever sneaky thing, you managed to merge two of my faveourite things didn't you? :D

the story's pretty good!the whole concept is really nice and i think that the adjustments you made were not really experienced in reviews so i wont point out anything else but heck it's awesome!

update soon again plz

i hope for team's pov?

wow...they are just great...Trevor and Jess I mean...and Angel is soooooo cute! Jess really shouldn't use foul words like that in front of her...truly...update soon :)

I love this chapter! I think its the best so far! :) Update soon

okay... pleasepleaseplease update SOON!

My my my... I see a very good author here. :) I really like this fanfic, even though I want a Huntik team POV ;P Anyway, update! And good job with the OCs!

Cool, and next chap the team is going to meet Jess' gang? That will be interesting, update soon!

aww what a sweet reunion...loved it and wow she was in a gang and became second in command so early? she did better than poor Zhalia I mean Zhal couldn't get kids to like her and Jess did that...wow...ok I'm impressed...you make me want to read Maximum ride..tghought I don't know if we have it here in Poland...

ps.I invite to check out my stories :)

hope you'll update soon another chap! Jess' and Zhalia tolk... sweet

Thanks Jenna! I love helping you with the story because I want to read the next chapter! I really liked this one cause you explain Jess more. Can't wait to read the next chapter! :)

Hmm... Intersting... This could be the start of something awesome! :D Keep going! And I do wonder what relation Jess has with Zhalia.

So... after a lot searching I found the review button...

prepare, here it comes:

I really liked this chapter, it somehow gave me the feeling zhalia and jess have met before? Or maybe are related or something like that? Ah well... we'll find out sooner or later I guess

Update soon!

ahh so they met I wonder how they will react now, especialy Sophie since one of Blood Spiral's main reasons of existence is to kill her, and I also wonder what will Rassimov do when he finds out that Jess joined the foudation(since I presume she will...) very interesting and can't wait for romance(mostly between Dante and Zhalia. my addiction) so update as soon as school and other things in life will allow you...