Reviews for Ley Lines
Guest 2019 chapter 1 . 2/3/2019
I enjoyed the story. Thank you.
Karethluv5ever chapter 1 . 10/26/2017
OooOOOoooooOooOooooOOOhhhhhhh
Guest chapter 1 . 2/4/2017
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Talia-Naeva chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
I would love to see Nov1.
rockndasha chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
hehe :) yeii! they r together they r together :D i simply adore this fic! short sweet and the most adorable couple in it! what more can ask of fanfiction? hehe, great job!
TheLadyBookworm chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
So sweet, like candy corn.
myladyswardrobe chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Found this from the Harem! (I'm a lurker there!).

Fabulous. Loved the characterisation of both. And the reason as to why Sarah is where she is. Its works so well. Glad that Jareth wasn't the one behind it all - though I bet he was pleased it did happen! ;-)

Wish there was more though.
pinkflora chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Maybe a little bit more character from Jareth (such a sarcastic fellow) could be used, but nevertheless, extremely cute story! I would have liked a little bit more detail on all the creatures appearing on All Hallows Eve. This is Halloween!
wizzcat chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Oh how I love happy, fluffy stories :)

Great job with completing the challenge so quickly!
BreathOfNocte chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Awww! How lovely. :) I love fluff. I do, I do.

Parts that made me spew my tea:

"What happened to three, goddammit!" - Oh, poor Sarah!

"No, precious[...]" Lol, I can just see him giving her that "I love you, but you're dim." look. Wonderful job, darling! You've done the Harem proud!
writertron chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
d'awww, this is sweet _
BelovedSlayer chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Love, love, love, the ending. It was good to read Sarah finally realizing Jareth's feelings for her.
UndergroundDaydreams chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Aww...sweet. He hummed her a lullaby. Snuggles. :)

Looks like you got them all in there. Always found ley lines interesting.

Thanks for sharing! :)
I'Like'Cheetos chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
Awwwwwwwwwwwie! I LOVE THE CUTENESS! _- I-iiiiits so cuuuuuuuuuuute! hehehe! It really made my night, and i know that I am going to have some good dreams 2nite! Loved it loved it loved iiiiiittt! :D You are amazing!

I.L.C
Verity Kindle chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
AWW! And they fell asleep like two little kitties curled up together.
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