Argh yes lots of yes this is great!
Also I always, always have my slash goggles on. Always.

I can almost hear the sarcasm XD

John and Sherlock really are a pair of naughty little kids sometimes, aren't they? :D

Best part was the bickering over the eyeball jar...it appealed to my sense of humour, I guess. Love your Sally Donovan!

That was amazing! Loved it!

Thank You I love things from a Yarders POV! Makes me very happy! :)

That was fun. Those guys can be really adorable.

Love this.

"Ow! Stupid...how did that get there? Ugh, Sherlock I hate you!"

LOL! That was hilarious! :D

Nice job!:D

This was so cute.

The last line was brilliant and the interactions between John and Sherlock were lovely.

AWN THIS IS SO CUTE. They're so childish! But endearing. x3 Loved it.

Aaaw

I love their in jokes and giggling... as well as Donovan's snarkiness... very good!

Well, this reader, with her permanent built in slash goggles, determines this was a slashy SUCCESS :D

Though I do think Sally gets a bit of a hard time. Sherlock's not exactly sweetness and light to her, so one could expect a certain amount of hostility, but everyone seems to blame Sally rather than Sherlock.

Anywho, lovely story -

This made me giggle- they're so cute!

Loved it all, well done!

'"John we have a case again! There is the distinct possibility of food. Or dangerous activities of a dangerous kind. "'

Love this! It's a nice story all round but I like this bit particularly.