Reviews for A Firstborn Son |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story nicely done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your James Sirius got red hair...sucks. I love red hair in a male Weasley but always envision that all Potter boy will have a black hair |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really cute! I love this! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww! I love the explanation! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story looks amazing. What's it based off of? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, Loved it. It is sooooooooooooo sweet. Hope you write more. I'm a sucker for sweet... Miss Millie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very sweet story! I loved what Harry said to Arthur, that was perfect :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a nice little story. Thanks for sharing it with us. I really like these little moments you come up with. The reason for James Sirius was excellent. The fact that Harry let his living grandfather hold him first was unbelieveably sensitive of Harry and a good gesture to the whole family of Weaseley. Thanks for writing. pms |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. So I never actually read this before because I generally avoid Harry potter fan fictions because I haven't read the first five books in practically five years and the sixth and seventh I read whenever they came out and haven't read since... So I generally ignore Harry Potter fictions, but your review reply about how you loved your Harry Potter series, but loved Erica more convinced me to go read all your Harry Potter stories. I started with this one shot. It was really well written and I definitely think you got the exhaustion of having a new child and the excitement too. You really always do awesome with emotions. I loved why you justified the boy being named James Sirius versus James Aurthur. And I adored how Harry gave the baby to his grandfather. All together this was a very well written one shot and made me go Awwwww. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's awesome, mizzy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked it! What Harry said to Arthur was SO sweet :D Rhiannon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice! I really liked how Harry gave Arthur the honor of being first to hold little James...so appropriate, and I've never seen this done in any other "birth" stories. Thanks for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...I can see the changes (kind of hard to miss them). Actually, I find it incredible how well you were able to adapt it to canon. Can't wait till you're done (with you-know-what)!Huzzah to you! D ~keroV |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww this is rely nice :) |