U captured their personalitys really well, good job

Is this before or after Gwen's dad figures out who Peter really is? Because if after, it might be something he should tell her about.

Cool, good story

awwww. i was looking forward to more bigger villans tho, not justa couple of muggers.

personally i think you should have waited a little longer for gwen to actually call him spiderman, but other than that it was really good

great story I can feel the romance!

happy thanks for this!

love it

And I thought it would have been the smell of garbage on Spidy!

Good story. A fun light read after a long day.

Aaaw cute. 3