I LOVED IT! GOING TO CHECK OUT YOUR OTHERS STORIES!

OMG IF YOU SEPERATE THEM IM GOING TO BE PIST!

I usually wait till the end of a story to write anything, but this was a amazing chapter I loved it.

Goosebumps...

HEY IT'S S0me18Skittles HERE! Changed my pin name.
I still can't stop reading your story. It just never gets old. I remember when you were updating this every so often. I remember the excitment and satisfaction waiting for the next chapter. It's been so long, and I still react to this story the way I did years ago. This really is a fantasticle story and you really are a outstanding author! Don't let anyone else tell you that you aren't. They are just jealous that they will never be able to write somthing so magical and touching as your stories. Only some people have the gift of writing the stories that touch us deeply, and you my friend have that gift. :3
I just had to tell you this, and remind you of your powers. 3

omg, this story was amazing! I just finished reading it all and I loved it!

Love the end and the story made me cry .

I love it I love it I love it

So sad but I still love it

I LOOOVE IT! :D

.IT. . ... i love it btw 3 ...THE SUSPENSE...AAHHH..

your story is good but is so annoy you always make them have daughter. good luck with your future story. I can't stand read any story from you. I am so sick they always have daughter in all of your story. at least they should have 1 boy and 1 daughter.

this is a great start! i love it

An amazing take on an awesome story. Other than spelling lose as loose, everything was perfect. You have real talent!

I don't know why, but this story reminds me of Titanic. Inuyasha is like Jack, a carefree person who lives life as it goes, has no money to his name, but is helping his love. Kagome is like Rose in which she feels trapped and just wants freedom like her love has, and not have to be proper for her parent(s). Inuyasha finally finds that special person and is helping Kagome escape her boring life bringing in adventure. Just like the differenced in classes, there is the difference in species; Inuyasha being the resented person for being hanyou, like third class, and Kagome being from the dominating group who thinks there the best, like first class.

The scene in from this chapter of the tree with Inuyasha holding Kagome, who arms are spread remind me of the flying scene from the movie. Both have the males showing the female how it feels like to be free in a majestic way.
I really am enjoying this story. You're a really great author.
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